Draft number 2

I've started the re-write (the bit where I actually write as opposed to scribbling on the first draft with red pen)… and then stopped now we have a moving date.

Pretty drastic stuff. I moved the cursor to around page 20 and held down the delete key. I've got the first 10 pages done, but the rest will have to wait until we have moved. I'm still trying to work out if leaving the love interest in there will add value. I'm erring on the side of "no" at the moment so it will be dropped, but that no only has a value of around 85%, so it may be put back in.

Anyway, I'll try to keep up the posting over the next four or five days, but with the move I can't promise anything.

Later

C